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-A new ikiwiki user, looking at ikiwiki both for his personal site but also as a team-documentation management system for a small-sized group of UNIX sysadmins.
+I'm looking at ikiwiki both for my personal site but also as a
+team-documentation management system for a small-sized group of UNIX
+sysadmins.
 
 * My [homepage](http://jmtd.net/) is powered by ikiwiki (replacing my [older homepage](http://alcopop.org/), which was a mess of scripts)
 
-I am giving a talk at the [UK UNIX User's Group](http://www.ukuug.org/) annual [Linux conference](http://www.ukuug.org/events/linux2008/) about organising system administrator documentation which will feature IkiWiki.
+I gave a talk at the [UK UNIX User's Group](http://www.ukuug.org/) annual
+[Linux conference](http://www.ukuug.org/events/linux2008/) about organising
+system administrator documentation. Roughly a third of this talk was
+discussing IkiWiki in some technical detail and suggesting it as a good piece
+of software for this task.
+
+ * slides at <http://www.staff.ncl.ac.uk/jon.dowland/unix/docs/>.